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A golden place

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A golden place

Do forgive me for my broken English
but my English had been broken
by diversity and a golden token

That will lead me to a better place
no dirty streets, no immorality-
no blazing haze

This is a sunshine town 
where we all wear crowns 
and there is no need to move in pounds(drugs)

The city's night will shine and glow
without prostitution's flow; 
cash and blow(cocaine)

Addiction will be love
to be loved
and everything above 

Forget about the old Babylon
trashy people and cigarette butts
painful memories like a punch to your guts  

I wouldn't mind if you call me a mutt  
I guess is alright!!
since criteria sucks the blood of our body like a mosquito's bite  
 
That's why 
i await the new city that is fly(fine)
like a griffin in the sky

This place is ice cold hot
blue burning hot
like a ice cold pot 

Where is this spot?
probably in the universe or not!!
in the center, like Hindu forehead's dot

It is a golden place
golden streets, no golden paint
real gold - dye rusty but  reborn as golden saint.

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:53:00 AM
    This is wonderful

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 9:51:00 AM
    Diogenes, I think this is one of your best works! "Do forgive for my broken English/ but my English had been broken/ by diversity and a golden token"..."addiction will be love/ to be loved/ and everything above "... Superb lines! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 10:52:00 AM
    I wish this place did not exist, nicejob though.

  1. Date: 8/13/2009 3:33:00 PM
    Excellent faith. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/13/2009 11:40:00 AM
    You Poem is excelente, My spanish is bad, I was trying to say, Your write itself was a smoking fire of truth, of God's truth, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 4:50:00 PM
    very cool....it reminded me of Nepal and the all seeing eye. see my Saffron Moonrise Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 3:47:00 PM
    Diogenes, me hermano,Tu tienes Mucho talento, me amigo, Sinceramente, Moses Muchas Gracias, comentaro, Dios te Bendiga!