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WAR

W iping out your brothers
A ll is barbarous and wrong
R evenge for nothing

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  1. Date: 8/12/2009 6:35:00 PM

    wrong. wars are fought to make people free. and havent you heard freedom isn't free. for every war there is some one set free thats Gods way of doing things. john h loving iii

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 3:17:00 PM

    War.... Why? You have it right, Jen... no revenge, just blind obedience to war hungry powerful men. Nice write. Lovingly, Dane PS This isn't Andy Hays' Jen is it?

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 8:31:00 AM

    Nice acrostic with a taste of senryu, Jen! Great third line! Ruben.