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                                                          Finger nail and dirt 
                                                          like belly button and fuzz
                                                                   Two peas in a pod





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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:58:00 PM

    soupmail!

  1. Date: 6/25/2010 9:11:00 PM

    This is a cute little poem, Rueben. I am on your page three trying to find some of your little hidden gems! thanks for the fav. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 9:26:00 AM

    Hi, Ruben! Congratulations on your winning entry in Nathan's contest. Your senyu is thought-provoking and to the point. I wish you more wins in future contests. Thanks for your comments on my poetry. Keep up the good work and God bless. Warmest Regards, Andrew.

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 12:04:00 AM

    Ruben, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 12:02:00 AM

    Ruben, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 6:57:00 PM

    Ruben you crack me up bro - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s “Two Peas in a Pod” contest – God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 2:12:00 PM

    Very cute and funny senryu! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 9:08:00 AM

    LOL wonderful write here, Ruben ... have to add to my Favorite writes ... smile ... congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest!!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 3:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 12:04:00 AM

    Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Ruben.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 6:22:00 PM

    Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s” Two Peas in a Pod” poetry contest with this very good poem. I don't know how you think of so many clever things. Your creativity shines. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 5:38:00 PM

    I KNEW this on would be a part of the winning poems.......LOVED, LOVED it!!! :) Congrats!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 5:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my contest! Nate.

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 8:25:00 AM

    ps....one more comment.....if this isn't a winner.....I must have flunked kindergarten !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 2:51:00 AM

    I love this. It's perfect.

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 11:29:00 AM

    Nice Stuff! So Fresh and clean with creativity and imagination. Your imagery is golden. Keep sharing.

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 3:58:00 PM

    I like this. Finger nail and dirt. Gardener's bane.Thanks for your comments on my little ditty. Joyce

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 3:45:00 PM

    Good write here!

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 9:26:00 PM

    I like that "peas in a pod" bit. But, "Finger nail and dirt" is a very strong and concrete expression.

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 5:44:00 PM

    Excellent execution of words...Raul

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 12:21:00 PM

    Hey Ruben, If humanity would get there thinking, a little higher than their belly button and fuzz, morality would increase over night! Lol, what do you think? Tu tienes mucho talento amigo, Sinceramente, Moses

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 8:50:00 AM

    just can't help imagine cute little kids being mischievous together, is this for the contest? good luck! much adored this poem :D

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 5:09:00 AM

    Way to go Ruben. A winner for sure. Good luck as always. Thank you for all your kind remarks.Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 11:12:00 PM

    you made me smile with this one--ben or bien--very good indeed------well penned oncemore Ru ben---charma

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 9:15:00 PM

    Cute..I like...and yes it was and is a true poem. I start next week for the very first time I am going to college!!!! Thank you!!!...The Southern Belle

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 8:40:00 PM

    This is really cute and so true! A winner you are Ruben!

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 6:10:00 PM

    This is a gem.....it really made me smile....BIG !

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 6:06:00 PM

    This is a delightful little Senryu Ruben, and yes, thank you, you did say you saw my Hummers Joy in the winners circle! I never doubted you, with your talent, I would be a fool to do so! Love this poem again! Certainly a winner in my book! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 5:28:00 PM

    I just finished writing a short piece about my son going off to kindergarten..will post tomorrow..this is a winner my friend....excellently done.

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 5:19:00 PM

    I'm chuckling, Ruben. I don't know how you do it!!! I can always count on something good when I read your poems. (...a smile, a little wisdom, an enlarged perspective on life, etc.) And lucky you. I wish I were going, too. Hey, it might be a good gathering spot for Florida's soupers and others to meet one day! Fairchild Gardens is inspiration's playground. You're gonna love it! Enjoy, my friend. Could you post pictures? OK I'm asking a lot and smiling.... Have fun. Lovingly, Dane

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