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twisted

Twisted words with hidden meanings
Not lies, but still deceiving.
I lie in bed I’m dreaming
Those eyes are all I'm seeing.
You tried to be misleading
I died inside still bleeding.
My mind is fried I’m reeling,
I tried I was mistreated.
Once thrived I’m now depleted
But I’ve never retreated.
I’m seated I’m not defeated,
I’ll beat it and be undefeated…

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  1. Date: 11/18/2009 5:32:00 PM

    congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 10:43:00 AM

    Congatulations on your poem being feaured this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 8:59:00 PM

    Congratulations for being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 10:29:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 9:52:00 AM

    Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 11/16/2009 5:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Saq. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2009 7:15:00 PM

    Interesting perspective for a thought provoking poem. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 10:39:00 PM

    Thank you for your incite Deborah, I've fixed the grammatical errors. As far as the name goes, it is not invisible as if I don't exist in the world. It is invisible as in, noone knows that I'm here writing. The poetry is invisible, not the poet :) When I first posted it was posting in my real name.. I didn't want that, as I wish for people I know to not see these things. Thanks for your words... possibly I will change it soon.

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 5:14:00 PM

    I lie...lye is a burning chemical...I died inside...your name..it's a harsh hard thing to call oneself...and self defeating..pick a positive name for you! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 11:25:00 PM

    loved the beginning, it hooked me from the start. Also loved the inner rym you gave as well. Enjoy your night. :)

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 1:30:00 PM

    Rise and survive-ow yes we will--well penned black on white no twisted twists,bravo-and keep posting--charma

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 4:43:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup Anthony. Best wishes coming your wayfor your future writing. Love, Carol