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She Let Me Slide In

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She Let Me Slide In

As I gaze upon your curves
The devil in me smiles
Enjoying something like you
It has been quite awhile

I swear that I am so hot
Dripping wet with sweat
Thinking of your beauty
All slippery and wet

I swore this is something
That I would never do
Lost in the excitement
Of enjoying you

I guess sometimes in life
The temptation is too great
Sometimes it is impossible
We are all bound to fate

As I climb on top of you 
Eyes dancing with delight
I plan to ride on you
All throughout the night

As I start sliding down
I can’t help but say
All the way to the bottom
That’s where I will play

All the way to the bottom
Then back up to the top
Once you ride a water slide
You never want to stop



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  1. Date: 8/6/2009 11:33:00 AM

    Wow Michael, ok how many are going to admit where you were going with this clever write. Ooooo you clever man you! It reminds me of my poem " One of Natures Delights " please feel free to read it, when the opportunity arises. Excellent poem>>James

  1. Date: 8/6/2009 10:09:00 AM

    Beautifully written, mystery, romance, and humor. Very surprising. Sara

  1. Date: 8/6/2009 5:34:00 AM

    I see you captured your audience..here there minds were somewhere else and then you turn the corner..shame on you. Great write. Thank you for commenting on From out of my soul...All is well..just writing on some things to add to upcoming book..see..From Out of the Pit-I cried..let me know what you think.

  1. Date: 8/5/2009 9:58:00 PM

    Wonderful twist Dear!!!! This southern belle was enjoying up to the END!!! Great write!!!.....The Southern Belle

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 9:58:00 AM

    MICHAEL !!! You almost gave this old woman a heart attack and then you revert to something all together different. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 8:51:00 AM

    Nice twist here Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 6:29:00 AM

    Michael, I really enjoyed this piece of passion, we all can get lost in the erotica from time to time. But, you my friend were brining it hot!!!

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 4:08:00 AM

    you got me going somewhere throught this poem then ended in a water slide,im still smiling --well penned clever boy--charma

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 2:58:00 AM

    MJ...MJ...MJ...what are we going to do with you man? This is great and you painted two wonderful pictures! Love it! It's kinda like my new poem that I just posted. Nate

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 10:55:00 PM

    too much excitement for this water slide XD awesome poem...for some reason without me knowing it sounded like Barry White was reading this out loud!

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 9:50:00 PM

    what does Robert Bly say?...sumthin' 'bout the "Wild-Man"......its gettin' hot on the soup!!!...jimbo

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 9:19:00 PM

    Yep, I bet you had some going on this one,Lol. Moses

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 9:07:00 PM

    I am laughing out loud and wiping tears from my eyes! My mind was sure off someplace else till I got to the last verse, and POW! This is definatley a KEEPER! Great poem Micheal!

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 8:59:00 PM

    Shame on you! I love it. BG