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Night Fear

Whispers from a foggy field beckon my call.
The man of the moon arises and brings on nightfall
The sun slips, drowning from yesterdays rain.
Sounds from the night air render the mundane.
Bright eyes appear awaiting in their dusky hangouts.
Growling, then a snarl...I jump up and about!
I ran back to my dwelling where I made camp ground.
I slammed my door, heart racing! I didn't make a sound.
Finally, sheepishly I dragged myself onto my bed.
Feeling insecure I pulled the covers over my head!

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  1. Date: 8/16/2009 6:43:00 PM

    You're so talented, Erin. This poem is awesome. I love it. "The sun slips, drowning from yesterdays rain./Sounds from the night air render the mundane."...Amazing lines. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/1/2009 5:25:00 AM

    Good morning Erin, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I am hoping you will enjoy your weekend as much as I am going to enjoy mine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 5:00:00 AM

    A great write...Imagery and immense emotion...The last line ends the poem very smoothly... Always, Farah