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Remodel my Daddy

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Remodel my Daddy

Dad has always been strict and hard. Me being his little girl, his protection is even
stronger. Looking through his eyes, i feel like i'll never grow up, And that's no problem
but i deserve to be treated correctly to my age, 15, i know shocking, i have an old soul,
I've always wanted, i guess you can say... " A dream dad." A dad you sit around and do
your nails, talk about guys, i'm interested in. Just simply, open and honest about
everything. Cry on his shoulder when i need to and go shopping with. But its just a dream,
it will never ever happen. I thank God, for my fantastic mother and father. 15 years of
marriage and still the best parents in the world, in my eyesight. Even though, i want to
remodel my daddy.

Life isn't Burger King, You can't have things your way!

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  1. Date: 8/3/2009 3:22:00 PM
    Thanks Moses, i hope my dad changes like that.

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 9:25:00 AM
    I remember my dad like that, when I was 15, but after I was 30. It's amazing how much that old man learn in just 15 years.Ha! Actually you see it was I who had grown and learn to appreciate his wisdom! God bless Keep up the good writing, Moses

  1. Date: 7/30/2009 9:06:00 PM
    Thanks Jimbo!

  1. Date: 7/30/2009 3:55:00 PM
    a loving tribute! Sabrina! I have 2-Daughters of my own! 21 and 19!!! jimbo