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A pen of mine

I look for a pen to record a line,
but the pen I find is an inferior design.
Not the pen I wish to use,
to write a line for you to muse,'
or send a love you may refuse.

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  1. Date: 7/31/2009 2:14:00 PM

    I'm with Carrie, you don't need a special pen...and she won't refuse it... : ) Brilliant! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/28/2009 1:46:00 AM

    Very witty words Bill.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 4:11:00 PM

    I thought this poem was quite quirky and conveyed that you could only use a quality pen for the intended Nice! Paula.

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 3:09:00 PM

    Your poetry could be written in the sand with a stick, or with a stubby little pencil, and still be quite lovely. How can we resist such beautiful words?? :)

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 2:45:00 PM

    I really like this Rhyme. Sara

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 2:29:00 PM

    When someone uses their pen to convey their feelings, it touches me more deeply than receiving flowers. Don't underestimate the power of YOUR pen, Bill. It carries a powerful message. Very nice poem! Love, Carolyn