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saying, timing and believing

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saying, timing and believing

I said
what was said
that she said
no one said
but we all said

about the time...

the time
of their time
that was timed
by his time
of our time

must believe....

believe
the belief’s
that was believed
before I believed
in our belief’s

in ever lasting life...

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  1. Date: 8/3/2009 10:20:00 AM
    Clever tongue twister!! You're a smart guy, Diogenes. I like the way you play with words and sounds. Great! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/2/2009 7:21:00 AM
    clever,im glad i read this,very clever,i love playing with words this way and the message-excellent--charma

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 10:27:00 AM
    Diogenes, very powerful. Nice structure, great thoughts. Thank You Bill

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 3:38:00 AM
    I like how each paragraph talks about a word.

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 9:07:00 PM
    The ultimate of simplicity in a message, as the apostle Paul said was in Christ, and for all of that, the complexity of a worldly mind cannot yet understand. This is very straight to the point, Diogenes, Excellent point, God bless, Moses

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 8:29:00 PM
    a beautiful poem of the power of the human spirit! Diogenes! I just love it! very original, I enjoy your art!!! jimbo