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The Scary Creep

Obsessive you could use
Creepy is another way to put it
Some girls might find it attractive
But I find it quite stalkerish

It scares me what you told me
You try to come without reasoning
I tell you stay where you supposed to be
But your ignorance got the best of you

Suppose you did ignore what I say
Suppose you forgot that I said that you would regret coming
You decide to come anyway, but there is something you don't know
I've got a little suprise for you and your guests

How about the fact that I'm trained to kill with a gun
Or the fact that I have been living under a solider my whole life
Or even the simple fact that I can call the cops on you
Those things alone should scare you

So don't come if you know whats best for you
Just stay away and we will all be happy
Because trust me, if you don't
You will never be seen again

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  1. Date: 7/27/2009 1:59:00 PM

    Read this so many times and had to the conclusion that you are serious. I don't think your playing about any of this here. So real and down to earth. My opinion what poetry should be instead of what people want to hear. Thank you for your comments as well. Enjoy your day and night.

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 7:28:00 AM

    Jessica, Frightening stuff girl. I hope that this is a creation of your poetic spirit and not a real threat to or from you. Very well done. Always, Will

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 5:12:00 AM

    What a powerful message Jessica ! I pray that your safty is not in cause for alarm. james