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Destiny

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Destiny

When you walked into my life, I was astounded I couldn't get over you,
But the moment you walked out, I shrugged it off,
You walked back into my life when I thought I'd never see you again and I was delighted ^^
You walked out and I got over it,
Now that you've walked back into my life once again, 
I've fallen for you,
But this time, 
I've changed,
I'm older and I understand my feelings now,
I look at you and I see the same, yet so much more than I had ever seen before,
Now that you've walked into my life,
I can't let you walk out again without letting you know...
I know it's been a few years and I was always too shy to show it,
But,
(insert name) *Im not telling you guys who it is * ^^
I don't wanna let you walk out of my life again,
I don't want to let you walk away without...
without...
knowing...
understanding....
That...Ever...Since...That...Very.First. 
Moment...
I've...
Loved 
You.
And 
I... 
Never...
Got...
Over...
You.
Even. 
Though. 
I....
Shrugged it off....
And... Mayb, just mayb, do you think this... 
This is DESTINY ?
Calling for YOU ?
Calling for ME ?
For US ?

I've always loved you... I just didn't know that I'd always been missing you. That empty
space... It was for you to fill...
<3<3 ILY <3<3

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  1. Date: 7/23/2009 7:11:00 AM
    A real grown-up love poem, Linh! I like your work very much indeed. Welcome to the Soup, we're very happy you came ...

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 5:22:00 AM
    Yes just maybe. Great writing. Love, Carol