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did you know?

Did you know
The cow was slaughter?
Did you know 
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The colonel lies?
Did you know
Your son has died?

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  1. Date: 7/23/2009 5:28:00 PM
    Yeah, Sue is right, this is Free Verse. Odd subject matter displayed almost like a skipping song and with a definite story to tell, however, it's very abstract. I must admit, "the cow was slaughter" irks me, it has mixed tenses and sounds as though "slaughter" was chosen over "slaughtered" to find an easier rhyme. It's not bad though, just as I said earlier, amazingly abstract.

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 2:37:00 PM
    Don't forget the "Form" ... this is Free Verse instead of "I don't Know" ... interesting and mysterious write here ... smile ... Welcome to Poetry Soup, Steve.

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 9:42:00 PM
    what makes you comes up with these kind of topics i wonder if i could ask?