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tears of rain

Freefalling
From heaven above
Father Cries

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  1. Date: 9/19/2009 10:36:00 AM

    Clever haiku here, James. Been quite a while since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you come back with more of your wonderful writing!!

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 4:52:00 PM

    a clear shout for help..a powerful write Light & Love..You're missed.

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 6:54:00 AM

    A thought to ponder... hoping they are tears of joy!

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 2:18:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. Keep on writing. Have a nice day! Karen

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 9:28:00 PM

    What a beautiful sentiment, so little says so much.....Karla

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 3:30:00 PM

    You know, it always seems like "rain" has accompanied the most tragic events in my life. Perhaps it is, indeed, our Father crying from above. Beautiful poem, James! Love, Carolyn