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A Delicate Balance

Breathless and beguiled
 Nature blankets my lone dreams
   Swallowing me whole





Written by: Amber Plocica
For Mr. Moreno's Haiku contest

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    Stephan McBride
    Date: 7/23/2011 10:11:00 PM
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    wonderful
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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 12/8/2009 9:43:00 AM
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    This is so good!!! Write more! Love to you. Dane Ann (soup mail)
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 9/6/2009 1:08:00 PM
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    congratulations Amber..its a pity you're not writing anymore..you ve got talent--charma
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    Joseph Spence Sr
    Date: 9/6/2009 5:58:00 AM
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    This is excellent. The words are breath taking. I can see the imagery of the blanket. Great job! ~Joseph
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    Sara Lokken
    Date: 8/10/2009 6:08:00 PM
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    You're not only eleven....no way!!!!!!!!! You write much better than I did at eleven... I saw your commenting on Rhinem's work. Little one, post more poems, because I wanna see them!:) Hugs, Sara
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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 8/10/2009 1:25:00 AM
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    Hi Amber, Congratulations on your honorable mention in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go.
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    Sue Mason
    Date: 8/6/2009 8:41:00 AM
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    Hope you return soon with lots more writing, Amber!
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    Shianna Metzgar
    Date: 8/4/2009 9:13:00 AM
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    nice poem amber >>>shi im the same age as u read my poems too
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    Brandee Augustus
    Date: 8/3/2009 1:40:00 PM
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    Such a lovely and haunting haiku. It's brilliant!
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    christopher higgins
    Date: 7/30/2009 7:11:00 AM
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    Awesome writing my friend...thanks for the comments.
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    derrick burton
    Date: 7/29/2009 11:02:00 PM
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    Your 11!!?? wow thats cool... where did you learn how to write like this? you play chess? enjoy your night or day.
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    derrick burton
    Date: 7/29/2009 11:01:00 PM
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    short and powerful and I can;t believe I missed this. Enjoy your night.
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    Alli B.
    Date: 7/28/2009 5:49:00 AM
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    wow Amber! i heard you were only 11. that is awesome...congratulations on winning the contest...Alli
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 7/27/2009 1:53:00 PM
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    very nice verse!
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    Sue Mason
    Date: 7/27/2009 1:33:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Amber!! I look forward to reading more of your writing!!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/27/2009 12:48:00 PM
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    Amber, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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    Constance La France
    Date: 7/26/2009 7:59:00 AM
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    one and only one, absolutely beautiful poem, please write more
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 7/25/2009 4:59:00 PM
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    Interesting. Sara
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 7/25/2009 12:52:00 PM
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    you are very talented! Amber! congrats!! jimbo
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    Trudy Diane Rider
    Date: 7/25/2009 10:13:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Amber. ~Trudy~
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 7/25/2009 8:25:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your winning haiku. Joyce
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 7/25/2009 6:49:00 AM
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    Congratulations on this winning poem, Amber!! Love, Carrie
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 7/25/2009 2:51:00 AM
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    Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Amber.Rgds Brian
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 7/25/2009 2:16:00 AM
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    I returned your soupmail...Raul
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 7/25/2009 2:13:00 AM
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    Best wishes with this one Amber.Thank you for your kind words and comments on my endeavours.Rgds Brian
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 7/25/2009 2:02:00 AM
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    Amber, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 7/25/2009 1:29:00 AM
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    Amber thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

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    Faith .
    Date: 7/24/2009 4:13:00 PM
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    Good poem. Way to speak amongs reality one must face.
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    Anita May
    Date: 7/24/2009 7:45:00 AM
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    Eleven? Amazing moment in time- You are reaching inside yourself And drawing forth your dream. Dream On!
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 7/23/2009 10:16:00 AM
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    It's hard to believe an 11-year-old girl could write such a beautiful haiku! Very nicely done, Amber. Love, Carolyn
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