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Destination

Days
Arrive
Then depart
The river flows
Into the sunset that ceaselessly glows

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  1. Date: 2/18/2010 1:00:00 PM

    these are some very good lines here a great and very beautiful poem, i am wondering tho what is that form? i have never heard of it and im curious. =)Jo

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 12:33:00 AM

    One for my favourites Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 6:48:00 PM

    This one should be published..its great. BG

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 5:00:00 PM

    yes :) Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 8:55:00 AM

    straight and simple. I like it!

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 6:53:00 AM

    Another great tetractys, Jim. Ruben.