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ORGY (2)

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ORGY (2)

I pine for your kisses
                              for your touch, for your plundering arms,
                                                    ........i pine.

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  1. Date: 9/2/2009 3:15:00 PM
    Amazing work

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 8:45:00 AM
    Original presentation on this haiku; remember you can use M dashes to maintain the classic(?) 5,7,5... Still 17 syllables. Great piece, KK! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 4:06:00 AM
    I can see this on two levels, k k. Either as the longing for a loved one or the longing for the gentle touch of pine needles sweeping against your arms with their beautiful aroma. Very nice image! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 1:39:00 PM
    smile...haiku...? pining for your kiss/your touch, your plundering arms/and so long I pine..Light & Love 5/7/5?

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 4:39:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 1:12:00 PM
    Very descriptive Haiku,K K. Sara