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Makers Mark and Shaggy

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Makers Mark and Shaggy

it rips my veins like a bruise
stumbles through my blood at midnight
vampire eyes of a haunting hue
              (your gaze mesmorizes me)
my addiction prowls the black sky
on feline paws of female 

rips through my bare skin like claws
power courses a sultry haven
naked sweat trickles down my chest
a line of want and eroticism
you trace it like a hungry man

in my auburn hair entwined your hands
(tangles coil around your fingers)
on my insides reigns your  strength

“freaky girl” on the radio
my thoughts consumed with you
       buried in a sea of fire
licking my lips like flames do….
(like small explosions behind my lids)

I would meet you out
wearing just an over coat and hat
       I am a naughty girl……
yes….you know I would
in a minute if you asked me too….

slide your legs between my thighs
and make me one with you…..

molten lava burns me hot
I’m gone with just one shot
turned on like a light switch
                     just awaiting you…..

sing it Shaggy….make me weak
bring it on….I’m such a freak….
mouths are made for tongues that meet
and cherry flavored sipping

come for me….as I echo….echo…in your skin

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  1. Date: 11/19/2009 8:50:00 AM

    I remember seeing this poem on another site...It is a very sexy write..overcoat and a hat..lovely attire...

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 2:46:00 PM

    Awesome write here, Christie !! Very erotic! Been quite awhile since you've posted here at the Soup ... hope you return soon with more excellent writing !!

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 8:08:00 PM

    Hey, young and pretty Lady...what is happening? Summer is gone!! Come back, we're missing you! I hope everything is fine. God bless you. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 11:00:00 PM

    Wow you need to write were I write,,, Your friend in Poetry,,,, JackReed3

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 6:55:00 AM

    Christie, where are you. I miss you. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 6:44:00 AM

    Another great write CMoses. Everyone is missing you here ...........Hope things are well with you and your family :-)

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 10:27:00 AM

    Great writing here, Christie! Love the "mouths are made for tongues that meet" line ... smile ...

  1. Date: 8/9/2009 4:37:00 AM

    Hey, almost a month! I hope you're not posting just because you're having a great time enjoying summer. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/4/2009 2:24:00 PM

    Hi, Christie. What's this about goodby? I've been ill and so not able to communicate, but I would consider it a great tragedy if you left the soup. You are so, so gifted. BIG LOVE, daver

  1. Date: 7/29/2009 11:56:00 PM

    I need a cigarette after reading this one and I don't even smoke!!! Great work, your work enthralls me...Raul

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 4:29:00 PM

    beware of the steps that follow. that make a sound hollow. beware of men with no reflection but now it's too late to notice this infraction. mamma said stay away from men that wear capes. too late now; there is no escape. jhl ooooh thats scary

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 9:14:00 AM

    ~ Smile, so, I hope "Your Beauty" will participate; for, I could think of 'No One' better at creative and profound writing, then "Yourself!!!!":):):) ~ "My Love & Warmth Always & Forever, To 'You & Your Little Angel Brianna,' Until The Stars, Spell Out 'Your Name,' Eternally, John!!!" ~ "Have A Very Bright & Beautiful Day, Beautiful Christie Moses!!!!:):):) Smile, "Bye" ~

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 9:08:00 AM

    Smile ~ It is a john loving iii creation....And, you can view James Goth, Ruben Orteallo, Charmaine Chircop, Carrie Richards, John Loving & Myself, to get an idea of the formattings expectations I suppose!?....And "You" have 24 hours to pass it on to another poet of choice? Which "You" must name within the last verse of "Your Poem!" ~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 9:02:00 AM

    "Good Afternoon Beautiful Christie Moses, And 'Your Little Tinkerbell Brianna!!!!'":):):) ~ Smile, I have left "Your Beauty" as the next hopeful partaker of a game passed on to myself yesterday; which I rarely involve myself within; but did so today!!! And I am hoping that "Your Beauty" shall carry the baton now; and see what type of scary tale that "You" can come up with? ~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 9:17:00 AM

    The whole poem is fantastic, but the fact that you repeated "echo" in your last line, brings it home! Superb write!-AA

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 12:25:00 AM

    Christie thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 2:18:00 PM

    Hi Christie, I would just like to thank you for all your recent comments on my work, coming from a poet I so much admire it is praise indeed. Thank you

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 8:02:00 PM

    yes, Christie! the comments agree! you got one hot-liquor here! great work!! jamesy

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 2:37:00 PM

    "Sing it shaggy"...Hey, you be de one who done sang it, baaaby! You be de Edgar Allen Poetess of de sultry. Christie, I get the biggest charge out of reading your stuff. Day is only one Christie. Hey, "I'm gone with just one shot!" BIG LOVE, daver

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 2:32:00 PM

    hot still with class-thats you our friend Christie---excellent write--charma

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:54:00 PM

    wow @.@ this is passionate as anything!!! jojojo thanks a lot for sharing =D I like your use of honest language, coloquial speech, being natural =) jojojo bye bye wiii

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 2:47:00 PM

    This is a powerful OVERT flaming poem sweet echo!!,…for this sentiment has lingered through the ages for the wanting,….and for you to write such an esquisite piece of voluminous poetry for the gander,…BRAVO,…..BRAVO to you sweet Poet !!!!!!!!! james

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 2:14:00 PM

    A lot of good feelings in this write..words coming alive with strong images..well done.

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 12:55:00 PM

    "... as I echo... echo... in your skin." I love that... Intensely beautiful and powerful. YOU have the talent Christie =}

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:33:00 AM

    ~ Smile, I am not quite certain as to why? But this entire write causes myself to consider doing some undercover work...."Smile"...."Excellently Beautiful Write Beautiful Christie, And That, Upon 'Your 29th Birthday" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always & Forever, to 'You & Your Little Tinkerbell Brianna,' Eternally, John!!!" ~ "Have A Very Beautiful B-Day, Beautiful Christie Moses!!!!":):):) Smile, "Bye Preciously Dear Lady" ~

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:27:00 AM

    ~(Computer glitches, bummer) But aside from this: I can see that "You" have far from lost, "Your Wonderous Abilities of Profound & Beautifully Laced Expressions of Gifted Verse!!!!":):):) ~ "You 'Always' Have Been My Very Favorite Poetess 'You' Know!!!!:):):) ~ And this steaming write here, is just one more truthful evidence as to the reasons why!!!!:):):) ~ "I would meet you out wearing just an overcoat and a hat...you know I would in a minute if you asked me too...." ~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:27:00 AM

    Hey, Girl, Holy Makers Mark!!! ..."slide your legs between my thighs/and make me one with you…../molten lava burns me hot"...Amazing, just amazing! Fantastic imagery, Christie. Lava!! And: "come for me….as I echo….echo…in your skin"... I love it, Christie. You're the best. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:17:00 AM

    ~ Now, on to this I am quite certain, fabulous poem or "Your Splendors" here....Smile, oh and by the way, (Smile) I love the title which "Your Marvels" has chosen!!! Smile, let's go open it up....WoW Wow wow!!! "You" are freaky aren't "You;" (Smile) but in a good freaky kind of way!!!!:):):) ~ "You" sound like my favorite dispatch girl upon the radio---Calling all cars to a much better scene, that I for one, would much rather see...."Smile"....~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:10:00 AM

    Hi Christie, I don't think I have read anything more wickedly sensual and naughty in a long time; what a breath of fresh air you are. This poem made me smile and left me tugging at my collar... your talent and style as always supremely inimitable ... makes this man wish for these words to be whispered in his ear... :)

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 7:54:00 AM

    Smile? Oops, looks like Michael My Brother got me! Dang! Smile, but that's alright; for he won't get me next time....So, how does it feel to be "The big 29?" Smile, "You Are Such A Little Baby Girl Aren't 'You!!!'" ~ And, not only extremely & rarely talented to say the very absolute least; yet, also, "Beautiful Beyond Compare!!!!":):):) ~ And, I soo sincerely hope, that life has been treating "You & Your Little Princess Brianna, Beyond Brillintly My Dearest Dear, Lady!!!!":):):) ~ Cont. ~

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