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summer day

Children playing
Kites flying high
Children laughing
Kites blowing in the wind
A storm is coming
Children are crying
Kites aren’t flying

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  1. Date: 7/15/2009 8:10:00 PM

    Oh, again with the opposite images @.@ jojojo suddenly everything was drowned in salty cracks @.@ brillian development of the poem, and it had no need to be too extended =D thanks for the experience=D

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 4:36:00 PM

    Excellent. I love this poem, Steve. Lovely, playful piece. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 2:26:00 PM

    Nice work Steve Summer day's are great muses...Raul