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Craving

my palate craves delicious 
double chocolate chuck 
cherry jubilee ice cream

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  1. Date: 7/12/2009 7:43:00 AM

    And now you have all the rest of us chocoholics craving it, too, Ed. Tantalizing poem. (Now where did I hide the chocolate?) Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 9:41:00 PM

    Interesting haiku...about food-desire You are such a great poet, please keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writings. Great you Ed ! Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 6:03:00 PM

    o.k. , now i have the munchies, yummy poem

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 4:41:00 PM

    I'm a vanilla girl myself, Ed, but I can always be tempted ...

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 3:56:00 PM

    Sounds inviting. I don't believe that I have had that kind. I will have to try it. Great Haiku. Sara

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 3:56:00 PM

    Ice cream is my downfall..about 10# worth. Very nice poem..very filling. BG

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 3:37:00 PM

    That's a craving I also have, delicious write...Raul