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Flitting
from blade to blade,
is that a leaf I see-
no,no a butterfly,happy
and free.

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  1. Date: 7/22/2009 11:43:00 PM
    Awesome!

  1. Date: 7/20/2009 7:27:00 PM
    Beautiful the butterflies are just like this verse of poetic lovliness.

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 1:23:00 AM
    What a beauty! You're a Genius! Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 12:22:00 AM
    Nice surprise at the end. reminds me of Kilmer or Frost. I always enjoy entering your contests. Keep 'em coming, my man. Regards,Gerard.

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 7:29:00 PM
    I agree that is has a child-like quality. I like it! Good job! Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 4:17:00 PM
    This is special..I can see it in a book for children. BG

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 1:25:00 PM
    Brian,...this is just wonderful,...your poetry here makes Jehovah's gifts to us all even so much more beautiful,...His awesome gift to us ,...poetry, and you for stiking that pen on this slip with such creativeness !! james Going in my Favs Sir !!

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 8:55:00 AM
    Funny I started out doing a poem on a butterfly this morning and I was at a loss for words. You did it with so few words. Wonderful. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 7:23:00 AM
    Another day brightener!! Loved this one too!!!

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 5:18:00 AM
    WONDERFUL! :) This poem made me smile. Love Christie

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 12:56:00 AM
    I love to watch butterflies sit on blades of grass flapping their wings...Raul