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Closing the Shop at the End of the Day

Dusk
Lights out
Lock the door
I turn towards home
This was another good day at the store

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  1. Date: 7/10/2009 9:46:00 AM

    yes you meet customers ,you sell,you chat too,some come to buy,some come just to say a word or two-beautiful coloured day,a day with different people--great write Jim

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 9:37:00 AM

    This verse seems to fill the pre-req's of the form perfectly and has a lovely, sound, whole, completness. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 9:04:00 AM

    Good for you, Jim! Too much say in 18 words. Great piece.