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Two Lovers

Through a meadow clothed in daffodils
Two lovers walk hand in hand
The birds are singing up in the trees
So sweet like a celestial band.

His hand it gently caresses her waist
As he whispers "I love you"
Her heart it beats a little faster
As she feels the same way too.

She gives his hand a gentle squeeze
As passion explodes inside
And with a gentle kiss she says
"I want to be your bride".

They come to the end of the meadow
As the sun sets behind a hill
"He says darling will you marry me"
"She says of course I will".

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  1. Date: 11/18/2009 8:06:00 PM

    Truly romanticism at its very best.. the "happy ending" story we are all looking for..u have written this so beautifully, Leon, and I so enjoyed immersing myself in this meadow... thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 2:42:00 PM

    Oh! So romantic and descriptive. Swoon, Swoon. Sara

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 4:52:00 AM

    Beautiful love story..Message Conveyed nicely.

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 5:34:00 AM

    aww so sweet, a devotional write God bless you

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 9:31:00 AM

    BEAUTIFUL POEM, Oh SO LOVELY!