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Hold me

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Hold me

It's summer here now
as the clouds float by drifting
gripping roots hold me

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  1. Date: 8/8/2009 5:47:00 PM
    Glad the suggestion worked for you. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 12:38:00 PM
    What an interesting perspective in this concise poem. I really like the last line though maybe gripping roots hold me may flow a bit better. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 8:11:00 PM
    Marvelous! This one rocks, Kristopher. Excellent. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 8:02:00 AM
    Great write! I agree with Frances!

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 9:01:00 AM
    If this one is in the Haiku comp, Kris, you're the one to beat! Congratulations already, Frances