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I want to Be Just like Yew

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I want to Be Just like Yew

never wrong

when the going gets rough

when all is gloomy

Addicted to chips
bitter sweet lips

in a coloured town

with a shorter distance to fall

Honest at times
& mostly at rhymes

You,person in the mirror,im looking to
I just want to be like you

(Thanks for all your thoughts on my "To all soupers:Warning!"Peice.Helped alot Xox)

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  1. Date: 7/11/2009 12:18:00 PM
    This is a great way to look inner strengths ........very nice!

  1. Date: 7/6/2009 7:32:00 PM
    I really like this poem!! It is very clever! It flows well! Great job! Thank you for commenting on my poem. I appreciate the feedback you offered!

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 6:11:00 AM
    Just be yourself and you will be the best you can be. Love the write.

  1. Date: 7/4/2009 4:31:00 PM
    cool write!

  1. Date: 7/3/2009 3:24:00 PM
    haha i like this one its cute and fun. your welcome glad i could help!! much love madison <3

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 10:48:00 PM
    These lines, my friend, are awesome: "Honest at times/& mostly at rhymes"...playful, fantastic piece. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 4:18:00 PM
    Great Write Saj. 3 O Clock My Time In The AM Ill Try To Be On. Imma Be Goin To The Park Tomorrow Though Lol.

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 3:24:00 AM
    Looks like you have overcome your dilema, and with exuberance I might add! :))-AA

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 2:30:00 AM
    aww a great write, kind of like mirror image wonderful, thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, God bless you from diane