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Mind games

Repetitive Double talk
(Read across then down and up)

Silent-------whispers
Whispers---faintly
Faintly-----saying
Saying-----softly
Softly------hearing
Hearing----meaning 
Meaning---something
Something-silent
Silent------ whispers


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  1. Date: 7/14/2009 6:12:00 PM

    Excellent! I really like it! You're so talented, Sandra! I can't close my mouth! : o Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/3/2009 12:18:00 AM

    Excellent Sandra.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 5:49:00 PM

    i think if i stand up i'll fall from dizziness up down side ways whoa!!!!

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 2:32:00 AM

    Thats Amazin' Sandra!Yewr Poetry is really Capable of loads and Its completly flawless!=)

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 9:20:00 PM

    Wow! Your work is work, what a fascinating poem...Karla

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 6:16:00 PM

    Wow...amazing, clever and creative!! Great job! :)

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 5:59:00 PM

    very clever and meaningful i love it