To One That I Love by Laurie Ginn


HGarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 2/4/2010 8:22:00 AM Dear Sis, this is written in the essence of a very Loving Mother " Tears come as a gentle rain " a beautiful moving sentiment Superb POETIC Talent put to Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS ...HG
Linda Witt-King Date: 1/12/2010 3:18:00 PM Yes Laurie, I do relate to this poem, as only a single mom who raised her children mostly alone can. All we can do is encourage our children to rise above, and to be gentle with our self on those days when the tears com ...as a gentle rain. I know them well. Beautifully rendered ...thank you and congratulations.
Abe Lopez Date: 9/18/2009 6:20:00 PM wanted to let you know that we still look for you and that you are not forgotten... looking forward to your return:-)
Sue Mason Date: 9/17/2009 6:50:00 PM While it may be true that we don't ever want to hurt our children, sometimes we do but even more important is that we remain true to ourselves and know that some day our children will understand. This is a beautiful write here, Laurie and since they changed the format here I have no idea how if it current or not ... oh well, glad you're here at the Soup!!
HGarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 9/10/2009 12:26:00 PM Dear Laurie, Such depth of motherly LOVE Great job. Where are YOU Sis I miss YOU please come backAll my LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...HARRY
Ronald Bingham Date: 8/22/2009 9:06:00 PM Laurie I just wanted to thank you for commenting on my poetry and to let you know you are sorely missed. Hope all is well and hope to see you posting once again. God Bless. Ron
Ruben O. Date: 8/16/2009 6:46:00 PM Where were you? I was missing you. I hope you're coming back with a masterpiece under your wings!! Nice to "see" you. Have a wonderful day-night. Ruben.
daver austin Date: 8/16/2009 5:28:00 AM Beautiful, Laurie. I've been off the soup for awhile due to eye problems...am just getting around to my mail. What do you mean by "tagged?"
Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/11/2009 4:13:00 AM Laurie every mum gives their child the best they can that is not money gold or flashy present,jus their love,mums arent perfect laurie but the intention for thier child always is,situations happen to all children ,mums everyone,yet no one takes the fault for happenings-hope you are feeling better sweet Laurie too--love charma
Ronald Bingham Date: 7/9/2009 7:44:00 PM Laurie I just had to comment again on this. My youngest daughter is facing the same problem and it tears me up seeing her hurting so. God Bless dear friend. Ron
HGarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 7/9/2009 5:35:00 PM My Dearest Sister, You put tears in my eyes, a Heartfelt piece of YOUR life I read that 52% of all Marriages in America end in divorce and we ask why are there so many dysfunctional childen It is a subject i do not understand YOU portray it (sadly) so well I LOVE YOU ALWAYS. ..HG
Abe Lopez Date: 7/9/2009 11:04:00 AM such a heartfelt poem. thanks for pouring your heart and soul out for us. written with much love................
James Marshall Goff Date: 7/9/2009 5:00:00 AM reads even more gripping the second-time, Laurie.... that last stanza is unreal good....and thanks for great story in your comment, jimbo
Ruben O. Date: 7/4/2009 12:21:00 PM Very emotive piece, Laurie. It's never a fault. It's just a consequence. Best wishes. Ruben.
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/1/2009 5:03:00 PM I hope you won't continue to blame yourself, Laurie. You can offer emotional support if your child will accept it. Children can suffer more when they're in a home where their parents are unhappy. God bless you for sharing this heartfelt write. Love, Carolyn
James Marshall Goff Date: 7/1/2009 2:16:00 PM very sweet compassion of a devoted Mother, just gently beautiful, Laurie, jim
Carrie Richards Date: 7/1/2009 11:05:00 AM Hey my friend..just found this heartfelt poem, and oh my goodness, you speak for parents all over this land...you my dear, put too much weight upon your own shoulders...this poem speaks so heavily of the responsibility you feel. But know that parents aren't meant to be perfect....we do the best we can with what we know and what we have. Take heart in the love you have for your boys. xoxox
Date: 7/1/2009 8:13:00 AM The emotion comes through your words in this one. Parents always want the best for their children and grieve for the pain in their lives. This is a heartfelt piece, one that parents will surely relate to. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/1/2009 6:56:00 AM hey my dear friend,at last you re back writing--always in my prayers--heartfelt and sad poems like if the writer passed through so many emtions lately-my friend im sure you will everything ewrite for your child,mums are always perfect in their children's eyes--good you re writing means we re smiling--your friend--charma:)
christopher higgins Date: 7/1/2009 6:45:00 AM This is strong write that shows a heart that wants to be mend..love the purity and honesty of this piece.
Ronald Bingham Date: 7/1/2009 5:41:00 AM Tears are never in vain, especially those shed for our children. Beautiful and heart rendering write. God Bless. Ron
Christie Moses Date: 7/1/2009 5:16:00 AM This is so very lovely and shows an open honest soul which is so rare in people. Love you Laurie G :)
Luke Steadman Date: 7/1/2009 2:58:00 AM This is a great but sad poem with so much in it...the final lines are my favorite with the tears coming as a gentle rain...Luke
Brian Strand Date: 7/1/2009 12:23:00 AM Love the 'haiku' style in the last verse Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
sajdah al-riyami Date: 6/30/2009 11:26:00 PM This is a soothing heartfelt One-->Just be there for herThumbs Up

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