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....hello?......

Gently i tread sleep.....the netherworld before dreams.....will i find you there??

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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 12:47:00 AM

    HI JIM... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA..

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 3:23:00 PM

    I like these 3 liners--most difficult to write-you have done a great job at it--I sometimes struggle with the descriptive but simplistic