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You

The sight of you, 
the scent of you,
the taste of you,
the feel of you.

The weight, 
the heat,
the rhythm and 
motion of you.

The guttural sounds
of pleasure
you release
from way down 
within you.

Wrap me gently,
keep me safely,
deep within the
heart of you.

There content
I will forever be,
with you.

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  1. Date: 7/8/2009 3:15:00 PM

    Dear Patricia, Exceptional LOVE POEM I know of the contentment of living in some Ones HEART YOU are well versed in LOVE ALWAYS... HG

  1. Date: 7/4/2009 1:50:00 PM

    Awesome job piece packed with passion! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 6:16:00 PM

    Pat, This is one hot poem "BABY!!!" I'm smiling here. I think I read this before. It shows so much heat and passion followed by the peaceful feeling of contentment. Very nice write. Passionate, but I didn't even blush. LOL And I sometimes do blush on here. Keep writing, friend. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 6/30/2009 7:19:00 PM

    Patty, this is pure joy at it's basic understanding of human love, this is a really creative poem!!!! the rhythm of your first stanza really sets-up the poem for a sweet ride!!! and thanks for warm comments!! jim

  1. Date: 6/30/2009 3:42:00 AM

    What a beautiful love filled poem. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 10:41:00 AM

    Lovely warm tender moving poem>>James

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 8:23:00 PM

    NICE

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 7:55:00 PM

    wow, what beautiful love poem...Karla