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Madness:Intro.

When my car was bumpy
And I opened th door
so to behold the racket
& I saw dead bodies on the floor

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  1. Date: 7/2/2009 8:34:00 AM

    *eyes grow big* mmmmm this is a very tempting beginning to something grand is it not? hehehh i am loving it. must go find the finishing touch to this beautiful madness amazing, madison

  1. Date: 6/30/2009 8:19:00 PM

    You stirred my emotions and feeling, Sajdah! This poem reminds me the scenes of the movie Rwanda, So vivid and pathetic vision. Your write is terrific; however, the image : terrible! Continue sharing. I'm going to the 2nd part. Ruben