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Happiness

H earts beat in excitement,
A s it passes by.
P laying in the air,
P eeking into your hearts,
I t brings a smile to every face.
N ever ending laughter,
E xpresses such enchantment,
S omehow it paints,
S unlight across the dark sky.


*Sorry for not being here for such a long time, but i didn't forget u guys at all n i
never will:) i see that everyone is writing some really beautiful poetry n i am enjoyin
lotz of them.....love n smiles Maryam*

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  1. Date: 6/28/2009 11:01:00 PM

    Such a joyous write that reflects your inner beauty. Welcome back, Maryam. I have been away for a bit too -- packing to move. Hope to see more of your work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 11:34:00 AM

    Maryam, This was beautiful. I love it! It makes me happy just reading this poem. Keep writing more! I miss it! With love, Alli B.

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 10:24:00 PM

    Welcome back, dear Maryam! Great lines in this lovely Acrostic. The last line is brilliant! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 7:36:00 PM

    Maryam, I love the pure innocence of this beauty! jim

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 5:59:00 PM

    Thank you for sharing this uplifting view with us. Nice use of the challenging acrostic form. Welcome back to The Soup! We all need a break from time to time but it's always nice to journey back to this poetry home. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 2:24:00 PM

    It's been a long long time since I wrote one of these.