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When Its All A Blur

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When Its All A Blur

I forgot my contacts
Under the tip of my toes

I forgot my sight
Along my life's road

I forgot how it felt
When warmth laid upon me

I forgot what earnest was
What it was like to see good

I forgot my mom’s womb
Is it where I’m from?

I forgot what an apple taste like
I won’t have another one

I forgot emotions, expressions
It’s all a blur...

Wait!
In that blur...
I think I just so the sun.

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  1. Date: 6/30/2009 3:50:00 AM
    Beautiful. Creative. Funny. Love It <3 Boo

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 4:16:00 PM
    powerful words, and beautifully expressed.

  1. Date: 6/29/2009 1:29:00 PM
    Like the 2nd stanza. Like it all, actually. What if we stopped doing the things we do. That would be a huge withdrawl fest. I don't think anyone can handle a change that big.

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 9:49:00 AM
    beautifully expressed

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 9:43:00 PM
    I know these moments and can never express it any better. You are a true poet.

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 2:28:00 PM
    This write is one thing that most writes are not orginal great flow to it all around strong poem great job

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 12:11:00 PM
    Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. A bit of humor to make me smile. Keep on writing! Karen