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Mystical Night

Sunlight
           Sunny brightness
    falling,changing,disappearing
        sun sunshine,dark,glow
    breaking darkening,happening
             dark, beautiful
                 Moonlight

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  1. Date: 6/27/2009 1:52:00 AM

    Lovely Description=)

  1. Date: 6/26/2009 2:08:00 PM

    Nothing missing from the the genre ... congratulations for the mastery.

  1. Date: 6/26/2009 1:54:00 PM

    typing error, so sorry

  1. Date: 6/26/2009 1:46:00 PM

    Creative use of this challenging form. Nice imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen