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Spirit Walk

I never know what I will find
when I wander through my mind

Like a deer trail that’ll bend and wind
a mountain forest in my mind

Twinkling stars through pine trees shine
a twilight meadow in my mind

Truth and lies seem to fall behind
in the tangled bushes in my mind

With clearing thoughts I seem to find
forgotten dreams inside my mind

As shadows clear I’m not so blind
to built up hardships in my mind

I walk, I heal and soon I find
a Tru spirit walk in my own mind.

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  1. Date: 7/7/2012 11:15:00 PM

    trudy, congratulations in Brian Strand's 186th contest. Take care, it's been fun reading many winners tonight* PD

  1. Date: 7/5/2012 5:37:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Much can happen in our minds..Sara

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 1:14:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:33:00 PM

    One of the awesome pieces i have seen recently..congrats, Jag

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/3/2012 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jag, a lovely compliment
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:32:00 PM

    Congrats Trudy on your 1st place win, nice poem luv vie

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/3/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vienna!
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 4:07:00 PM

    What a gorgeous stroll thru your mind...congrats on a wonderfully penned piece. gwendolen

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/3/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gwendolen!
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 2:30:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem.

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/3/2012 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joann!
  1. Date: 7/1/2012 10:13:00 AM

    congrats Trudy on a great first place win .. awesome ..luv...

    Rider Avatar Trudy Diane Rider Date: 7/3/2012 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda-Marie! I didn 't know that one was judged till you commented...thank you ! ~Trudy~
  1. Date: 10/5/2009 6:09:00 AM

    When we stop long enough to have that walk we can find all sorts of items some good, some bad, and some that need discarding. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 11:10:00 AM

    Nice mysticism. Keep it up! Sincerely Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 7:53:00 PM

    Good write! - eddie

  1. Date: 6/27/2009 2:39:00 PM

    I really enjoyed reading this gentle yet beautifully vivid poem. Great floe and rhyme. Very well done. Regards Heidie

  1. Date: 6/24/2009 8:43:00 AM

    Hi Trudy A beautiful spirit walk indeed. Also a lovely couplet. Truly enjoyed hun. Hey I too wrote a poem called spirit walk. I think you would enjoy it. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 11:30:00 PM

    Excellent coupleyts Trudy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments