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No Hero To My Heart

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No Hero To My Heart

He opened the door
I did th sin
Against all wills
I let him in 
                            Chaining a heart
                            Choking the pulse
                            Robbing a life
                            3 crimes unfalse
                                                       Me,right here
                                                       Just the one to blame
                                                       "Dont hate the player
                                                        Hate the game"
                                                                                      He said he's changed
                                                                                      Said:"Never again"
                                                                                      Said i was important
                                                                                      Love for who i am
But my crimes Was nothing but letting my only pump in rape I just parked my life At the 
sidewalk today.

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  1. Date: 6/23/2009 1:51:00 PM
    love the way you presented this poem like a walking stairs---this is deep----"dont hate the player,hate the game",love for who i am",powerful write--the will of a person not to commit crime and sin,then he sins again,though he commits the crime,there s still some light in this person,lets give him a chance love him for who he is...then maybe he change----------awesome-----------charma

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 10:58:00 AM
    These are some powerful verses, and the form is interesting, which makes me think of someone who continues to fall of the wrongs they have done. Great work!

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 10:09:00 AM
    Thanks for reading my poem "Insecurity". I'm glad it made sense to you. Now, as for this poem! I love the way it's shaped in those chunks, it makes it read like the narrator is almost choking on words and each chunk is separated by a heartbroken pause. The narritive itself reminds me of something which happened to me once. It wasn't anything at all shocking or scarring, but a Bell Jar esque Buddy Willard moment. If you get that reference. My poem reached you and yours reached me, thank you. :D

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 4:17:00 AM
    Amazing Love. Been Here Done This. I Love How You Get It To Flow Into Words. Peace. Kisses. Boo. PS. Your Writing Gets Better Day By Day. Dont Give Up. Ever. <3

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 1:42:00 PM
    I like your daring, Sajdah P.S. Thanks for being my regular reader. It flatters me.

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 1:05:00 PM
    "But my crimes Was nothing but letting my only pump in rape"... amazing line Sajdah, the whole poem seems pent up on a tragedy... good work Sajdah

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 11:25:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 11:15:00 AM
    I agree with Robert, this line "[...]I just parked my life At the/ sidewalk today." brilliant! Terrible, heratbreaking piece. This poem arise awful feeling. Great work, Sajdah! Ruben.