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Sun Fuzzes

Brilliant light beaming,
Casting rays upon the Earth,
Dust particles shine.

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 06/15/09

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  1. Date: 6/27/2009 10:23:00 PM

    Again I read your work with humility, and thank you for honoring me in your contest. I was awy for 2 weeks and i snow catching up on my reading. May you be bless.

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 1:01:00 AM

    The dust particles is creative, nice work as always...Raul

  1. Date: 6/24/2009 6:46:00 AM

    I think that it is so funny that you wrote a haiku because of one of our children's cartoons. LOL it is wonderful though. Lots of Love, Misty

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 10:28:00 AM

    Brilliant vision! The title is a geniality. Great work, Nathan. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/21/2009 8:57:00 PM

    Isnt it an amazing sight? this is very, very good. BG

  1. Date: 6/21/2009 8:33:00 AM

    As much as i hate dust, there's something special watching them in flight in sunlight. Like drifting souls who finally settle, great Haiku Nathan>>James

  1. Date: 6/20/2009 10:18:00 AM

    OOOOOOO Amaszin!Totally Lovin' The ignition Lights<3