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Dooo-iiii-nnnnnn-ggggggg

I stood behind the bathroom door
I may have been about three or four 
I held Mom’s biscuit in one hand
I loved to play in Kitty’s sand

Grin..

I found a toy mounted on the wall
This must be Kitty’s! Then I’d call
Kitty, kitty, kitty, come look and see
But kitty was busy, ignoring me

Frown..

I pulled and pulled, until it sprang
Dooo-iiii-nnnnn-ggg, it sang
The doggie came running, I pulled again
Dooo-iiii-nnnnnn-ggggggg, Dooo-iiii-nnnnnn-ggggggg
Dooo-iiii-nnnnnn-ggggggg, Dooo-iiii-nnnnnn-ggggggg

Grin..

Sandra Stop! That infernal noise!
Get out of that bathroom! 
Come play with your toys!
Leave that doorstop, leave it now!

But!..hffa,huffa, 
Now don’t you pout! 

Frown..

I grabbed a fist full of doggie hair
And plopped in front of the easy chair
Kitty came, but I was mad
So I hit her, then she scratched me bad!
Doggie waited, till I let go
Then stole my biscuit! Wouldn’t cha know!

I cried and cried, till Mommy came
Still at night, that thing,….it calls my name

                    

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  1. Date: 7/23/2009 2:42:00 PM
    wonderful...loved it...playful happy innocent memory! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/26/2009 5:36:00 AM
    This was fun to read. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 6:40:00 AM
    OMG you must have been a handful! This is hilarious! ~lol~ Thanks for the thoughtful note - wish I could spend some more time here, but got too much to do. I hate this whole process and don't even want to move. Long story. Anyway, hoping things will be easier in about two weeks - before they get insane once again! Missing you too, and I thank you for this morning's smile. Hugs, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 6:42:00 PM
    Those door stops are just too much fun!!! A fun, cute poem, Sandra !!! Well done! :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 6:03:00 PM
    Delightful images (and sounds) of your childhood, Alexandra! Guess you've learned to be more careful playing with those cats and dogs now, eh? Great poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 4:51:00 PM
    Lots of fun...I needed a laugh. BG

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 4:46:00 PM
    love the original, fun structure! great sound! Sandra! jim

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 4:45:00 PM
    cute. but i was looking for a form. but you don't need one. john

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 4:27:00 PM
    You are such a creative writer...you are such a good story teller with your poems...well done piece.