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Fireworks

Shine, light has shimmered each shade
Blossom into rose and corrupt into beauty
Opportunities are left not to fade
Solemnly, we are creations not doubts

The lack of confidence pronounces into courage
Baby steps – gradually potential sunrises…
All which is desired – that push, jostle… encourage
Thine eyes of fear shine mightier towards pity.

Laughter, such an obligatory like air
A chuckle, a giggle, a smile – bring thy congregation
I shall tickle, oh yes – I beg thee share…!
For I am yet a fool towards the clown
Yet a hero towards your heart’s welfare

A teardrop as delicate as the heart
Rivers down into a spiral of hatred
Yet soothed down, shan’t rip thee apart
For desperation holds a mount of guilt

Shine, the day has finished with a bang
The morning shall rise with a boom
Finally in the end, it shall more bang
All which is left seen by the eye is

Fireworks

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  1. Date: 1/5/2010 5:32:00 AM

    Congratulations Sami, You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest with three emotion packed poems. As I read them, my mind was gripped and my emotions floundered within your words until much understanding came forth. Excellent! 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 5:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on having three poems make it to the finals! Way to go! Best wishes in the next round. Karen

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 4:28:00 PM

    Hi Sami, congrats on winning the first round of ps contest!! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 9:22:00 AM

    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Sami >> James

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 12:02:00 PM

    Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 12:30:00 PM

    Very Nice! "High Five!" I enjoyed this alot! Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 2:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on being featured simsim :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 4:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Sami. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 1:24:00 PM

    Many congratulations on your poem being featured Sami >> James

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 6:08:00 AM

    Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 2:50:00 PM

    Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 7:10:00 PM

    this is a great poems. nice job

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 1:45:00 PM

    Interesting writing. Sara

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 6:43:00 AM

    "For I am yet a fool towards the clown/Yet a hero towards your heart’s welfare"... Brilliant lines, Sami! Great poem, my friend. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 6:31:00 AM

    beautiful romantic poem and sweet--charma;)