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The realities of life

Brightness of the sun
Things are different in them both
Darkness of the moon

By: Misty Leccese
© June 15, 2009

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  1. Date: 6/10/2010 2:47:00 PM

    this one makes me wonder if you are talking about more than just sun and moon!

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 8:34:00 PM

    Both your posted poems are wonderful Misty. It takes patience and talent to write a good haiku and senryu. Thank you for your comments also. Will be looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 7:34:00 PM

    yes, Misty! well done! jim

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 4:39:00 PM

    Now, you're getting deep. I like it. Indeed, different realities. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 10:45:00 AM

    Misty I loved your senryu - leaves a lot of room for contemplation - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 10:23:00 AM

    Clever Haiku>>James