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First Love

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First Love

He spoke to me in a loving way,
	            I wanted to reply, yet not a word I could say
Blinding me like a bright summers light,
	            His eyes met mine, I knew I was up for the fight.



My palms were sweating, 
My face felt hot,
My heart was racing,
                              These feeling were like a battle,
	              A battle I hadn't yet fought.


To me,
He was the most beautiful song that I'd ever heard
Yet in the lyrics I didn't know a word.



                                He'd brightened the room, making me see 
	                    That all I wanted was him and me...

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  1. Date: 6/20/2009 4:15:00 PM
    you went deep in this one nice poem

  1. Date: 6/19/2009 11:58:00 AM
    Lovely poem Charlotte>>James

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 10:31:00 AM
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww*.* You are Going to My Favs:p HAHAHA Obviously:D

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 9:41:00 AM
    Thank you for your comment.i enjoyed reading this because i love love poems.really nice

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 9:26:00 AM
    funny, i mean romantic... love has a way of getting our attention. keep writing buddy. you are great!