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My Heart

Notice how my heart is like a cage
Locked up, afraid to let others in
Not wanting to get hurt again
Will I ever be able to heal?

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  1. Date: 8/8/2009 12:18:00 AM

    Amen. Sister. haha jess you have a talent. and you need to admit it. love Em

  1. Date: 6/17/2009 8:43:00 PM

    This poem as really good. Your analogy between your heart and a cage is excellent. It adds visual imagery. Nice writing. You will heal when you can let go. Then, you can move forward in a positive direction. Take care, Jessica. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 2:01:00 PM

    I know this feeling..the voice in the poem is afraid to allow the hurt back in...one day and step at a time.