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despair

Im drowning in my own remourse
my life changed it went completely off course
shattered dreams of empty times
its dragging me so far down I feel blind.

The sun has gone
my light is grey
im just hoping my sun will return
and lighten these tormenting days.

Im normally strong and brave
I gave, I gave, I gave
my light is shade
im not strong and brave
my light is gone
someone please rescue me
and rebuild my soul strong and brave.

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  1. Date: 11/7/2009 4:25:00 AM
    We have all felt this way at sometimes or other in our lives. You have expressed the topic very well. There is a higher power that can strengthen you in these times. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 6:58:00 AM
    the course may be long, and it may hurt, but you will come thru because you are much stronger than you think....how i know?... you can voice your feelings and you can ask for support. janetta.

  1. Date: 6/12/2009 8:58:00 AM
    Inside you will find your rescue. Get the book Broken Open by Elizabeth Lesser.

  1. Date: 6/12/2009 6:31:00 AM
    it's so hard to stay positive...my feelings have been echoping yours this week and I think you are right to ask for help. HUGS Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/11/2009 3:33:00 PM
    Good to meet you you, Gareth. I wish I could rescue you, but the Buddha says not to take on another's karma. Friend, I have enough of my own to account for. Keep writing. You may just rescue yourself. Love, daver