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when you left!

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when you left!

Why you let me to fall in your love 
If you knew that one day you will leave me
You didn't  knew that you will take my spring with you
when you left, you made my heart lonesome 
You left  big pain on my heart
Your memory is stay with me 
I still remember of you 
Your remembrance is giving live to my life 
You're so sweet in my memorial  
Life is nice and pretty with you
When you leave! What happen to me? 
Love is playing his play with me 

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  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:08:00 AM
    Oh the pain of loves separation. I think most of us has been through it at some time. I hope you found another. God Bless. Dave.

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 8:10:00 AM
    Ryhming stanza.