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"Captured"

I watch you fade away
Until you are seen no more
When day breaks and night falls

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  1. Date: 5/17/2010 10:25:00 PM

    I miss reading your work, I wish you would come back the soup has changed in so many ways...Raul

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 11:37:00 PM

    Great haiku, I sure miss your comments and your unique posts. Where have you been hiding? I pray for your return...Raul

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 1:25:00 AM

    Beautiful Haiku, dear tyesha. Lainie

  1. Date: 6/21/2009 9:59:00 AM

    Very interesting haiku here, Tyesha ... the title is intriguing also .... thanks for your comments

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 3:16:00 PM

    Very beautiful Tyesha. I love what is not said here also. Well done. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 2:12:00 AM

    hiya! dear would you be interested in buying and reading a poetry collection written by me.If yes please do go to www.abook2read.com page and click on the collection link.I assure you it would be worth your while. Shishir Gupta

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 8:43:00 PM

    Wonderful senryu, Tyesha! The tree lines are amazing. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 8:36:00 PM

    almost like an energy that dissipates with light-contrast, what a cool haiku! Tyesha, fav! can hang on it forever, and thanks! fun to see you comment on my work! James

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 7:09:00 PM

    Amazing write! Thank you for your soft comment! - yes I am speaking of me, I thank you again for your kind wishes! Keep on posting for talent is dwelling in your heart! - jeremia

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 1:00:00 PM

    The title had me..the first two lines also made me think...this is well done.