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Erosion (haiku)

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Erosion (haiku)

Gullies scar brown earth
     Hurricanes bring erosion
          Of both soil and lives

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:23:00 PM

    love this little gem, just want you to know, i'm thinking about you, Carolyn, have a nice festive season...

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 4:54:00 AM

    Wonderful Haiku here Carolyn.Are you better now?-kash

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 1:18:00 PM

    Carolyn, what an awesome haiku you got here. Hope you are enjoying your football weekend my friend. Had a blast with my niece btw ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 3:54:00 PM

    Yes, it is God's way.

  1. Date: 4/10/2010 5:16:00 PM

    Carolyn~ Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 4/10/2010 7:10:00 AM

    so sad but true carolyn so much said in such few lines congrats on being featured this week also thanks a million for your countless support to all here at P.S. keep up the great work

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 6:29:00 PM

    Congrats on your haiku being featured. You (FLA) have hurricanes, we (PA) have potholes and blizzards. Vince

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 11:52:00 AM

    Congrats on your featured poem this week on Soup .. .. an excellent choice to feature and share...luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 5:52:00 AM

    Hi, Carolyn. Congrats on this Haiku being featured. Hope the hurrcane situation has calmed down. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 2:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Carolyn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 7:43:00 AM

    Congrats Carolyn on your featured poem this week on Soup.. an excellent Haiku to feature and share ...luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 7:33:00 AM

    Carolyn - another one of your wonderful pieces. Many congrats on its feature. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 4:40:00 PM

    enjoyed reading today, good one!!

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 3:28:00 PM

    Carolyn, this must have been a while back. It's a great haiku and I'd not seen it before. Congrats on its being featured. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 1:36:00 PM

    Carolyn, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week > exceptional Haiku, from an exceptional writer >> James

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 9:39:00 AM

    More truths, much said in so few words. great write.

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 4:22:00 PM

    so true! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/9/2009 11:15:00 AM

    Splendid haiku you have penned here with much truth...thanks so much for sharing and for your always kind comments~Mary

  1. Date: 11/21/2009 2:11:00 PM

    a sad state of affairs....good one! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/20/2009 1:24:00 PM

    All too true and welcome back to the Soup.. thankxxx for commenting on my Christmas poetry contributions.. just posted one more also... luv those traditions during holidays... so good to see your name come up on comments board... again, welcome back... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 11/8/2009 3:06:00 PM

    Carolyn, So true, so true. Katrina good example. A precious heart oborbs all it can. A outstand Haiku hun. Thanks for sharing, smile. You're a gem around here that's for sure. Take care. Love you, Patty

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 11:40:00 AM

    beautiful haiku ....thank Carolyn 4 the comment

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 9:53:00 PM

    Carolyn this is a fantastic haiku! I especially like the first line. And, it's so true, that life can be destroyed as forces of nature follow their own path. By the way, you've got mail, my dear! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 4:47:00 PM

    this is great haiku ..we got to face the hard reality of this one . Thanks for the comments on my poems :) . Marco

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 1:15:00 PM

    It's such a huge reality. Nice composition.

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 12:11:00 AM

    One of your best Carolyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

  1. Date: 8/29/2009 1:23:00 AM

    Carolyn thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 8:31:00 AM

    Nicely observed Carolyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

  1. Date: 7/17/2009 11:41:00 PM

    A great haiku Carolyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 2:38:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading this Haiku. I has beautiful meaning behind it. We tend to forget about tradegy when we are not personally involved in it. There are people out there that are still hurting in one way or another from the tradegy of Catrenia. I hope that you and your family were not personally hurt. Sara