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Pain

Pain is good I know I’m
Alive
In a world of hate in a world of lies
No one can see what is happening to me

Personal hatred in my personal life
Agonizing pain caused from my lies
Inside I wish that I could just die
No one can see that all I am is a lie

People don’t see me nobody cares
Anguish and hatred is all I see there
Intent on relief a razor I hold
Nicking my skin I don’t care what I’m told

Peace is all that I want, can
Anyone hear me
Involved with my life
No one can see me

Pain, sharp pain as I slice my wrist
After life’s gone that’s all that I wish
Incentive for life is all but gone
Never will feel cause my life is done

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  1. Date: 6/19/2009 12:12:00 AM

    Congratulations on this poem being featured this week. Ernilando

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 10:36:00 AM

    Rebecca. Congratulations, but this poem...beautiful as it is, disturbs me. I hope you don't mean these words, but how could you write them otherwise? Someone does care...my ex-husband recently killed himself and I am very sensitive to the mention of suicide. Life is HARD, but it is beautiful even in its pain. Keep writing. Keep living, Rebecca. Patricia Langston-Moran

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 7:45:00 AM

    Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 6:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rebecca. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 6:37:00 AM

    Congrats Rebecca on "Pain" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 10:45:00 PM

    Rebecca - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 7:44:00 AM

    emoyional piece, great flow of rhymes and passionate words.. great you