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Salvation of air

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Salvation of air

Intensity rise
the power of a deep breath
pierces me inside

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  1. Date: 4/16/2010 9:40:00 AM
    the makings of a fine haiku! juggle a bit setting line 1 action lines 2 & 3...a slight turnabout in the 3rd line..which you have! title is always line 1. No capitalization of punctuation needed. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 12:57:00 PM
    Great Haiku Kelsi>James