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Thunderstruck Sunshine

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Thunderstruck Sunshine

The clouds shook
A thick, black, very wet blanket out
In the Southeastern quadrant 
Of the New Mexico firmament,
Complete with lightning
And growling, crackling,
Massive basso-profundo sound effects,
Inviting the sun to rest,
Take a load off, 
Reeellaaaxxx! 

Abrasively radiant,
Helios glared a brilliant, heated, passionate,
Steamy smile
Into the arid monsoon skies

And refused Storm’s invitation
To lie down and go to bed

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:51:00 AM
    How charming and expressive i Powerful images: I can visualize the whole scene very well. And the very wit in the last verse...O, Reverend !:)

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 2:47:00 PM
    Thanks Rebecca, a very effective Free Verse. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/22/2009 3:16:00 PM
    Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Rebecca. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 10:51:00 PM
    Dear Rebecca, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 9:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 10:22:00 AM
    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 4:04:00 AM
    Love this work. I commented on another poem. I meant that the place described sounded too cold for me to want to go there. Sara

  1. Date: 6/11/2009 8:34:00 PM
    exuberant, talented poetry!

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 6:19:00 PM
    Brilliant, Brilliant! I see it all unfold before me. Masterfully written-AA