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Doubt

If you’d lend me
Your soul
For just one day,
Could you live
Without any feelings?


© 2009 Stefania Carmen Misaila

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  1. Date: 6/10/2009 6:03:00 AM

    no......assuming the soul is a real concept? I do. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 4:18:00 PM

    This probably would be best catagorized as free verse. Haiku are usually three line poems using images instead of feelings. I like the question at the end of this poem. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 10:54:00 AM

    Stephanie, i like the meaning in this poem, i have sent you soup mail regarding Haiku>James