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Individualism

Descending tear drops
Frozen no duplications
Snow flakes God’s art work

Nathan Bane Leccese
©All Rights Reserved 05/29/2009

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  1. Date: 6/10/2009 9:13:00 PM

    Have you ever watched Fight Club? I remember a scene when Tyler Durden says 'you are not a beautiful and unique snowflake, you are the same decaying matter as everything else'...first thought that popped into my head after reading this, particularly with the title being the focus on uniqueness and specialness. I used to stare at clouds in the sky thinking God painted a canvas especially for me. It was a comforting thought, much like this poem...

  1. Date: 6/4/2009 10:38:00 AM

    Hey, Nathan, Did you tell your boss that you're our Prince? Tell him we're missing you. : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 10:32:00 PM

    emotion of sadness,cries through our solitude,and i love the last verse--'snow flakes God's art work'---beautiful--charma

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 12:23:00 AM

    I know where you're going, that's why I like this Haiku. But you would help the readers with ...punctuation! ( M-dash, ":" , ";" , or a ",") It's just a constructive opinion, don't get mad. Peace and Love. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 10:34:00 PM

    nice haiku!! Hugs! You have mail.

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 6:42:00 PM

    Thanks Nathan, I need to improve on my haikus-:)-AA

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 11:10:00 AM

    Great Haiku Nathan, brillaintly scribed> James

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 9:51:00 AM

    yeah love the imagery. snow flakes are so beautiful

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 9:49:00 AM

    Nathan, a subject I'm familiar with! great haiku!! Jim

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 9:36:00 AM

    what great imagery beautiful job again my friend