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Try to Imagine

Pearl studded gate looms 
The Alpha Omega speaks
“Welcome home my child”

Nathan Bane Leccese
©All Rights Reserved 05/26/2009

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  1. Date: 6/3/2009 12:28:00 AM

    Every line is charming and enchanting, my friend! Great job! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 3:36:00 PM

    i can imagine a beautiful heaven--wonderful--charma

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 4:24:00 PM

    Very nice image of the pearly gates, Nate. Poems with the same syllable scheme as haikus that don't deal with nature are senryus. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 1:38:00 PM

    Nathan, this haiku IS about nature! It expresses recognition of our Creator; the Creator of all NATURE. And, of His creation's desire to commune with Him, then, to ultimately rest in His presence! I love it! Donna

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 1:29:00 PM

    Great imagery of the great beyond. ice work your work is heading in an awesome direction...Raul

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 12:20:00 PM

    Good write of going home to the pearly gates...good work.